辅导课程

HIR竞赛课程安排

HIR竞赛课程一(online-1.5h)

- Review the rules and requirements of the Harvard International Review Essay Contest to ensure compliance and understanding.

- Discuss the prompt for the essay contest and explore different possible approaches to effectively address it.

- Share successful strategies for winning essay contests, including tips on writing style, organization, and persuasive techniques.

- Explore the importance of choosing a specific angle or argument for your essay and focusing on it throughout. Emphasize how this can enhance clarity, coherence, and depth in your writing.

Translate into Chinese:

- 审查哈佛国际评论杂志论文竞赛的规则和要求,确保遵守并理解。

- 讨论比赛论文的命题,并探讨有效应对的不同方法。

- 分享获胜论文竞赛的成功策略,包括写作风格、组织结构和说服技巧等方面的建议。

- 探索选择一个具体角度或观点并在整篇文章中集中阐述其重要性。强调这样做可以增强你写作时的清晰度、连贯性和深度。


HIR竞赛课程二(online-1.5h)

Explore various research methods suitable for the topic and prompt

- Learn how to evaluate sources for credibility and accuracy

- Conduct initial research for the essay topic

- Discuss how to develop an effective research plan

探索适合主题和提示的各种研究方法

- 学习如何评估来源的可信度和准确性

- 对论文主题进行初步研究

- 讨论如何制定有效的研究计划


HIR竞赛课程三(offline-1h)

- Develop an outline: create a well-structured essay outline that presents a clear and logical flow of ideas.

- Receive feedback from teacher: Submit your outline to your teacher for review and revision suggestions. 

- 制定提纲:创建一个结构良好的论文提纲,呈现出清晰和逻辑流畅的思路。

- 获得教师反馈:将你的提纲提交给教师进行审查和修订建议。


HIR竞赛课程四(online-1.5h)

 - Receive constructive feedback on the outline 

Discuss how to conduct detailed research and analyze sources

Learn how to incorporate their feedback effectively into your outline to improve its coherence, organization, and overall quality.

接收提纲的建设性反馈

讨论如何进行详细研究和分析来源

学习如何有效地将他们的反馈融入提纲中,以提高其连贯性、组织性和整体质量。

HIR竞赛课程五(offline-2h)

write the first draft of the essay based on the discussed outline

The first draft of the essay should include a clear thesis statement that captures the main argument or point of the essay.

Each paragraph should be organized around a topic sentence that supports and expands on the thesis statement.

Incorporate relevant evidence from credible sources to support your arguments and provide examples or real-life scenarios to illustrate your points

根据讨论的大纲撰写论文的初稿应包括一个清晰的论点陈述,以捕捉文章的主要观点或论证。

每个段落应围绕一个支持并扩展论文主题陈述的主题句进行组织。

引入可靠来源中相关证据来支持你的论点,并提供例子或现实场景来阐明你的观点。

HIR竞赛课程六(online-1.5h)

- Discuss strategies for effective writing and addressing the contest prompt

- Analyze the introduction, body, and conclusion of the essay

论文的初稿

讨论有效写作策略和应对竞赛题目

分析论文的引言、主体和结论部分

HIR竞赛课程七(offline-1h+1h)

Second draft of the essay

- Work on the second draft of the essay, incorporate feedback from the rough draft review

论文的第二稿

- 对论文进行第二次草稿的修改,将初稿审查中得到的反馈意见融入其中。

HIR竞赛课程八(online-1h)

- Make the essay stand out by ensuring clarity, coherence, and a strong thesis statement.

- Incorporate unique perspectives or original insights to differentiate your essay from others on similar topics.

- Provide compelling evidence from credible sources to strengthen your arguments.

- 通过确保清晰、连贯和有力的论点,使文章脱颖而出。

- 结合独特的观点或原创见解,使你的文章在类似主题中与众不同。

- 提供来自可靠来源的有说服力证据来加强你的论点。

HIR竞赛课程九(online-1h)

- Review edits for grammar, punctuation, sentence structure variety, paragraph organization, formatting consistency, and proper citations.

- Ensure smooth transitions between paragraphs to maintain coherence.

Review edits for grammar, punctuation, sentence structure variety, paragraph organization, formatting consistency, and proper citations.

- organized logically with smooth transitions between paragraphs.

- 检查编辑内容,包括语法、标点、句子结构的多样性、段落组织、格式一致性和正确引用。

- 确保段落之间有流畅的过渡,以保持连贯性。

- 检查编辑内容,包括语法、标点、句子结构的多样性、段落组织、格式一致性和正确引用。

- 逻辑上有条理地组织,段落之间过渡顺畅。

HIR竞赛课程十(offline-1h)

定稿润色 

Smaller edits important for polishing finished product